Olonkho. P. A. Oyunsky
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Onomatopoeic words and interjections brought their contribution to complicate the English translation: ‘Uhun-tusku!’; ‘Urui-aikhal!’; ‘Ker-bu! Ker-bu!’; ‘Buia-buia, buiakam!’; ‘Buo-buo! Je-buo!’; ‘Anyaha-anyaha!’; ‘Art-tatai!’; etc. The only exception we made was for the interjection ‘Хы-хык! Хы-хык! ([hi-`hik])’, transferred as ‘Ha-ha!’. In some cases we used explanations translating the meaning of interjections: ‘Look here’, ‘Listen to me’, etc.
The following example, taken from a draft translation of the Olonkho, shows how we tried to keep imagery and metaphors, i.e. the so-called ‘picturesque words’ in the translation:
Орто дойду улуу дуоланаАан ийэ дайдытыттанАрахсан барда,Аабылааҥҥа тиийдэ,Күнүн сириттэнКүрэнэн истэ,Туналҕаннаах толооноТуoһахта курдукТуналыйан хаалла... | The great giant of the Middle WorldHad leftHis primordial Motherland,And come to the thicket,He was running awayFrom the sunny land,The bright surface of whichWas shining far behindLike a white patch on a cow’s head… |
This fragment describes Nurgun Botur’s journey to the Under World, while the sunny Middle World is left behind shining brightly as a white patch on a cow’s forehead. The picturesque word ‘туналый’ means ‘whiten/shine’, ‘lighten/glisten’, ‘radiate/beam’, and as such its semantic structure consists of the components ‘glisten, shine’ and ‘white colour’. The translation of the verb keeps only the component ‘shine’, but its second component is compensated in the word combination ‘Like a white patch on a cow’s head’.
Another one of the serious issues was the translation of polysemantic words which are used profusely in the Olonkho. For example, the word ‘түhүлгэ’ [tjuhjul`ge] – ‘tuhulgeh’ has a few meanings that hamper the choice of the right word: 1) a place where a festival is celebrated, or where people dance their round dance ohokai, which also refers to the name of the dancing circle, or a place for wrestling, or an Olonkho performance, etc.; 2) the festival itself, i.e. it can be a synonym for the summer solstice festival Esekh or any other fest (wedding party, etc.). Thus, in Song 9 the word has all the meanings simultaneously but I had to choose a concrete one and it was the festival Esekh:
They made
A wide and vast,
Joyful and bright
Esekh festival – tuhulgeh
On a beautiful copper surface
Of their blessed Motherland…
In conclusion, the Olonkho is a text with a high percentage of national-cultural components that make the process of translation extremely difficult.
An Olonkho hero
Acknowledgements
I would like to express my gratitude to the Government of the Republic of Sakha (Yakutia), Ministry of Culture and Spiritual Development of the Republic of Sakha (Yakutia) and to the M. K. Ammosov North-Eastern Federal University for their financial and moral support of my project.
An Olonkho-teller improvising a fight
This translation would not have been possible without the advice and assistance generously provided by various people. First of all, my special thanks are extended to the Chancellor of M.K. Ammosov University, Professor Dr Evgeniya Isaevna Mikhailova; to the First Vice-Minister of Culture and Spiritual Development of the Republic, Tuyaara Igorevna Pestryakova, who believed in me from the very beginning; to Professor Vasily Vasilievich Illarionov, a world-leading expert in Olonkho who encouraged me to translate the Yakut epic; to Professor Tamara Ivanovna Petrova; to Dr Lyudmila Sofronovna Zamorshikova; to Yuri Petrovich Borisov, a researcher of the Olonkho Research Institute, NEFU, Yakutsk – all these experts in the Sakha language who led me to a deeper understanding and appreciation of the Olonkho and who were a greatly appreciated source of moral support. I would also like to mention Dr Robin Harris’ approval and enthusiasm towards this project, and her precious initial ideas, which included referring us to a proofreader.
I also wish to acknowledge the help provided by the staff at the Olonkho Research Institute, namely the Director, Professor Vasily Nikolayevich Ivanov, and the Chairperson of the Translation Department Natalia Alekseevna Nikolayeva, for her valuable technical assistance.
I would like to express my deep gratitude to my team: Dr Svetlana Yegorova-Johnstone, Albina Skryabina, Zoya Tarasova, Sofia Kholmogorova, Lyudmila Shadrina, Varvara Alekseeva, Agrafena Ivanova, Zoya Kolmogorova, Irina Popova. Many thanks to Geneviève Perreault for being a patient proofreader and adviser. Our team discussions on the ideas and highlights of the translation revealed much that I could not have discovered from any other source. A special word of thanks to Mr Paul Norbury for his patience and support, for his brilliant finessing in making our texts sound more English, and thus more acceptable to a world audience.
Most of all I am grateful to my family: to my mother, Maria Nikolaevna Nakhodkina, who offered countless pieces of advice with regards to the Sakha language and supported me in spirit; and to my son Aleksey, who believed in me and inspired me.
PUBLISHERS’ NOTE: ILLUSTRATIONS
Under guidance from M.V. Ammosov North-Eastern Federal University, the illustrations appearing